Belmont Park Hotel

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darkmaas
darkmaas
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The confident snicker of high heels on hardwood
Now silenced by the pencil skirt
Puddled black around your ankles.
Emerald panties aiding and abetting
Cling like neon cuffs

Those green eyes
First wide and anxious
Now heavy-lidded
half-closed with lust
My palm and fingers
moistened with your desire.

"Did you bring the riding crop?"

darkmaas
darkmaas
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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
IS THE CROP

passive or active, TK U MLJ LV NV

kokshurkokshurover 12 years ago
five stars

i liked it. gave it five stars. i did find the final quote inconsistent with the rest of the plotline. hey, check out my tanka style poem "exhibition"

live4passionlive4passionover 12 years ago
evocative

juxtaposition of sound texture color.. quite successfully done. Welcome back, long time no see.