Erotic PoetryBelts by my bedOn the nightstand
Next to my bed
Lay a few belts
Resting by my head
One of them's brown
And one of them's red
One of them's striped
One woven of thread
Whenever I see them
All I think in my head
Is being tied up and whipped
By you in my bed
Hands behind my back
Or up over my head
Feeling the sting
My skin turning red
Giving you pleasure
Your desires fed
As you tower above me
Tied up in my bed
Wishing and waiting
Dreaming in my head
About those belts
Next to my bed
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Again, a woman that knows what she wants is exciting, loved it
might also be known as "A Whipping Post"
"As you tower above me
Tied up in my bed"
This is easily understood from the previous context, that it is you who is tied up as he stands over you; however, perhaps a comma after "above" might not jar the reader and thus make clear who is tied up and who is not. Just a suggestion.
You might also have added more detail to the extremes you wish for, which would spiced the poem up a bit.
i.e "The belt lash whips
It bites my thighs
As you bit my cit
I could see your eyes"more...
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