- Erotic Poetry
- Beneath Your Stars
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Lay me down upon the sands
beneath your stars
Grace my skin with the gentle touch
of your fingers
As midnight waters lap at our feet
and our bare bodies fold into each other,
wrap me in the moon’s light
and in the morning I will bathe
with you in the sunrise
- COMMENTS
KOLKOREalmost 16 years agoI like very much this set of gentle quiet erotic poems. There is a common tecnique which I particularly like both in this poem and in most of the others. It's the particular type of metonym which mixes materials of nanture with the description of the loved one("your stars"), turning the whole universe into one unified fielld related to the object of love.
