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Click hereLull and Murmur
May your lull and murmur crescendo
and hackneyed phrasing overcome,
to heckle hair-shirted blasphemer,
who‘s handfast to handsome sums;
We‘ll swagger amongst the hedgerow,
dull our tongues and sour the leafy tips,
rickrack and trim the thorny tear,
'til you‘re kissed rose cold, and fevered
optimistic;
Certain orchids and stigmata,
were pollen falling, root cap renewed,
like them bones and Shiva burning,
as we‘re stone deaf but true- to tone:
Vadi Swara;
Had we the solution set,
We‘d remain solvent, deteriorating,
our words sleep inducing, to you
I love you some whither to you I do,
-to you.
- COMMENTS
bflagsstabout 13 years agoAuthorVadi Swara might be the only thing someone with a high school education might have trouble with. But all you have to do is match up root cap renewal, Shiva burning, and the Vadi Swara in Indian music and it's no mystery.
Lull to Crescendo, fevered, optimistic, renewal, deteriorating, back to lulling sleep inducing somewithers... riverrun, past Eve and Adams, from swerve of shore to bend of bay, brings us by a commodius vicus of recirculation back to
ishtatabout 13 years agoCryptic:"my love letter to anyone whose tried to write a really fantastic poem" (hope I got the quote right) I'm with Tristesse to a significant extent and am not sure I will ever quite understand. Not unlike my efforts with "The Listener" crossword.
Maria2394about 13 years agoreally sure what you are speaking of, but I do love the way it feels to say some of these phrases aloud. Some of the lines present excellent visuals and Love when a poem does that. I gave you a 5...
~ maria
GuiltyPleasureabout 13 years ago.......a translation because this is nonesense to me. Perhaps you're being ironic, if so, well done because it SOUNDS ok.
Tess
