Betwixt

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Far beyond in unknown lands
I barely feel Your knowing hands
The kissing fire of leather strands
The clicking tock of a clock's two hands.

In timeless ease I may repose
Beneath the lash, its raining blows
The crimson haze in my vision grows
As heated stripes line rows on rows.

In measured silence the fire dies
Stars streak before my tearing eyes
Your fingers stroke between my thighs
Betwixt pain and pleasure redemption lies.

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Scheherazade73Scheherazade73almost 11 years ago
Love this

Can't decide which line I love better: "the kissing fire of leather strands" or "as heated stripes line rows on rows" Holy crap, way to show & not tell!!!

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
IF ONE GIVES AND THE OTHER RECEIVES

where and who has the redemption, TK U MLJ LV NV

MerrymakerMerrymakeralmost 20 years ago
Precision

Simply put, I like this start to finish. Thank you.

~Merry

YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
Betwixt

I agree.

"The kissing fire of leather strands"

is a good line.

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
pretty darn good and

I like the way "The kissing fire of leather strands The clicking tock of a clock's two hands" sounds.

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