tagNon-Erotic PoetryBeware of the Creeper

Beware of the Creeper

bytheoncomingstorm©

Random guy on the web
Sending email after email to me
Proclaiming to be someone else
Insisting I wasn't who I proclaimed to be

He swore he knew who I was
Acted like I was part of his life
Projecting his failures on me
Sobbing about past flings and his wife

Who does he think he is?
What is it that he wants?
Why does he act like this?
Is he here to threaten and taunt?

Keep your mouth closed girls
Keep your information guarded girls
Be careful what you write girls
Be wary girls

For he proclaims to come to your rescue
But he is just a reaper
He is on the prowl
Beware the Creeper

*this is a resubmit*

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by Anonymous

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by pelegrino12/27/13

You say, he is a reaper. What proof is there?
Otherwise the girls may like it!

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by twelveoone12/20/13

presents a dilimna

as to whether to comment as a poem or warning
To and including the third stanza, it actually is creepy and thus works as a poem.
Then becomes message.
5ed, but I feel it should have been finished as amore...

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by Anonymous12/20/13

ironic, prophetic or tragic?

I am his female counterpart... we never did connect... I'll always wish we had... How could he not have found me? Most likely because I'm delusional... maybe you're writing about me, posing as a guy...more...

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by Oldbear6312/20/13

This just sucks

There always has to be a creep. As you say in you poem, be guarded and careful. Good idea to report it to the police as well. I understand they can do wonders now with e-mails.

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by theoncomingstorm12/20/13

Yes Sir

He is real and I have tried. I found out there are a few other women he's harassing here so hopefully with all 5 of us putting in the word something can be done about the situation.

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