- Erotic Poetry
- Biology...Lesson?
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Click hereLook - it's not that I find you
Attractive, or anything
Really; you could just say that I'm
So very, very curious; Primed, if you will
Oh, but don't worry -
Never say never; assign a pop quiz and I'd readily accept
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 16 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,500 poems.
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Anonymousover 18 years agoA delightful poem! Clever and entertaining-- a well-deserved "E"!
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mojo_catover 18 years agoi must have been half asleep, geez. cute, very cute!
mojo_catover 18 years agobut the image needs to be clearer. im not sure what is happening in the last line, and while ambiguity has its appeal, in poetry you cannot waste any words - if you can rephrase that last line or add some more description earlier, ti might be easier for the reader (or me anyways) to figure out what you are trying to say. it's a good start though.
