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Click hereBlack Flowers
I sit here staring at rainbows
Dread
The colors glisten bright with
Effect
And in my arms I hold my
Amour
Candle glaze burns it's silent
Taunt
Once again black flowers
Haunt
Written by;
~PinkMoon~
2/10/02
Nice acrostic but it seems forced, with certain words seemingly jarringly out of place.
acrostics are more effect when used in a more subtle way,( just my opinion) but since its the certain word youve chosen, it looks pretty good the way it comes out :)