- Erotic Poetry
- blue Revelations III
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Click hereBlue Revelations part III
Lacerated statue silently
poses in emerald eyes,
beneath pussy willow branches
near her mossy mound.
Coiled was her form round
depths of his body still
drenched in soiled inebriation.
Walls of imagination had
freed her musky sap
molding sensuality into clay.
His dagger, dampened her pool,
with tainted fleshly fever
cleansing stained karmic skin
under her willow tree
of forgiveness
sealing his mortal blood
inside her terra cotta ground
- COMMENTS
My Erotic Taleover 18 years agoI am intrigued by the warriors <grin> and your poem...thanks for sharing your talented writes with us blue~
sweet GA peachesover 18 years ago... is to take ones mind into places, others dare to go. So you have expressed, here in these fine tuned verses, that speak of utter passion to singed flesh....in hopes of bluerain.... breath-takingingly, stunning... 'awe me again'.... sweetGApeaches
Anonymousover 18 years agoI can't always follow the subject, but the words
always flow smoothly. I would love to see you dance
since you sure have rhythm. sand
