- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Blue Skies
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Blue Skies, cumulus clouds,
it seems this is how heaven must be.
'Cept if it twern't me lookin' at 'em.
- COMMENTS
demure101over 11 years agoI do get a little confused by the double negation (except + not)
Desejoover 11 years agoCapitalization on Blue Skies: is this a reference to the song, I wonder? Which is rather hoppy happy like.
Desejoover 11 years agoTwo lines that are straight forward and in thought and language - with a predictable association (to heaven). And then the last line: full of contractions and alternative spellings, and a conclusion that is not what one would expect. It makes you wonder why the exception: because in heaven he would not be conscious of the sight? That being dead wouldn't be "heavenly"? That he doesn't belong in heaven? Or something else entirely? Hmmmm....and all in three lines!
