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Click hereAfter the "Fragments of the Women's Writing" by Ursula le Guin
She reported that a group of elderly Hunan women were using a secret, ancient script handed down from the oracle bone carvings of the Shing Dynasty (16th Century BC) and the writing of the Chin Dynasty (3rd Century BC).
The old woman said
these are the forbidden characters
bone words spoken
upside down
These are the bone words
spoken mother to daughter
wrapped in silk
sung by the fire
These are the fingers
of the silk embroideries
hung by the fire
upside down
They are the daughters
speaking in fire words
forbidden to speak
the women in their silks
eyes to the ground
These are the forbidden secrets
written in bone
spoken finger to eye
whispered in fire
M.S.Leavitt
"Jd4george"
Anything written of something secret or hidden
Has about it an almost mystical aura.
you know about this??
I do not object to the use of "bone" here, which a find to a bit of a poet's cliche.
I am sorry I missed this first time around
I humbly bow
up the principles of philosophy with buddhism in mind, but yet also leaves a mystical presence. that is what i pulled out of the piece. very nice jd
throughout the poem. It holds it together nicely and makes it really sing.
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