- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Both far away and near
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To be mashed and compressed,
molded into some shape or form.
To be stretched beyond boundaries,
a road rolling further than the eye.
To contract and to congregate
like a great gathering of tribes.
To pervade in assorted directions,
a prism in a hall lit with mirrors.
To be up and down, in and out,
to be here and to be there too.
To be coming and to be going,
to be pushed and to be pulled.
Divisible and multiplied as well,
unrestrained yet also confined.
Extended yet apprehended,
both far away and near.
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 17 years agoStarts strongly austere
But finishes with too many floating actions
Not tied and made real.
LeBrozover 17 years agoStarts strongly austere
But finishes with too many floating actions
Not tied and made real.
Tathagataover 19 years agothe idea of this...
But you should perhaps use examples instead of just the words themselves.
the prism image is a great one, if you could come up with an example like that for each verse or even every other verse it would color the poem a lot more.
Just a thought.
it's a good idea don't just let this one go
