tagNon-Erotic Poetrybouquet of words

bouquet of words

bybutters©

he led her, blindfold,
hands bound gently
and bid her "smell,
tell me what it is you scent"

so she did
and her heart was filled with roses
ripe as velvet wine
enough to make her head spin

she didn't see
the single thorn
spur dipped in silver
hid in filigreed words upon his page

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by Tsotha01/29/14

Haha. Thank you UnderYourSpell and greenmountaineer for making me look at this poem through different angles. My own first reading was that this was a comparison to a poem: looks good from a distance,more...

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by UnderYourSpell01/24/14

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Men and their honeyed words eh? Well done

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by greenmountaineer01/23/14

I'm not sure why this isn't categorized as erotic poetry. It is IMO and beautiful. I admire your economy of words.

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by Cleardaynow01/23/14

I liked this one

Nicely wicked and fun

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by Tsotha01/23/14

Beautiful, butters. I really like the inversion at the end.

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