Brave New World

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demure101
demure101
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As well as the age of the rationale
    it's the age of the speechless denial:
the sullen threat of the lipless snarl
    to guard the untrodden mile
and the healers hands that no longer bless
    and the loss of acres wild
and the lure of opulent emptiness
    and the sadly abandoned child
and the age of the mindless egotist,
    the age of the sullied soil
now that any new venture will needs be grist
    to the mill of expansion's turmoil –
and it's oh! for a simple glass of stout
    and a grin and some good old cheer
just to reassess what it's all about
    and what on earth for we're here...

As well as the age of the megabyte
    it's the age of the wholesale slaying
now settled old maps get changed overnight
    to the flower of the nation's braying
of well-calculated callousness
    and pleasures without bound:
a virtually quite real caress
    to turn our heads around
and the age of video sentiment
    that we all are clamouring for
to forget all our various discontent,
    so emotionally poor -
and it's oh! for a simple pint of stout
    and a grin and some good old cheer
just to reassess what it's all about
    and what on earth for we're here.

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DawnJDawnJabout 11 years ago
Yep!

You got that right! That's the world we live in, and the older ones among us, even those of us who have adapted the technology to our lives, don't belong. We're for the simpler pleasures, for the warmth of human contact. God bless us everyone! :)

erectus123erectus123about 11 years ago
nice work, homage to A.H.?

pass the pint, "don't worry-be hoppy"

Ashesh9Ashesh9about 11 years ago
Settled old maps do get changed overnight : Marshall Tito's Yugoslavia

Overnight split up into Serbia , Croatia , Bosnia ..... Etc. ...er ....Kosovo .... , 5-ed .

AngelineAngelineabout 11 years ago
Beautiful

I like how facile the writing is--overall the read is smooth as silk--although I agree with 1201 that the first strophe is more balanced than the second. The refrain keeps it all together though. I think maybe if you cut each strophe by 2-4 lines the poem would have more punch. Just my opinion, of course. :)

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 11 years ago
stout

after

a few more periods (one?)

well the most intelligent rant I've ever seen

S2 jumps a little too much

but the first two lines nails it

5ed