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Click hereAs well as the age of the rationale
it's the age of the speechless denial:
the sullen threat of the lipless snarl
to guard the untrodden mile
and the healers hands that no longer bless
and the loss of acres wild
and the lure of opulent emptiness
and the sadly abandoned child
and the age of the mindless egotist,
the age of the sullied soil
now that any new venture will needs be grist
to the mill of expansion's turmoil –
and it's oh! for a simple glass of stout
and a grin and some good old cheer
just to reassess what it's all about
and what on earth for we're here...
As well as the age of the megabyte
it's the age of the wholesale slaying
now settled old maps get changed overnight
to the flower of the nation's braying
of well-calculated callousness
and pleasures without bound:
a virtually quite real caress
to turn our heads around
and the age of video sentiment
that we all are clamouring for
to forget all our various discontent,
so emotionally poor -
and it's oh! for a simple pint of stout
and a grin and some good old cheer
just to reassess what it's all about
and what on earth for we're here.
You got that right! That's the world we live in, and the older ones among us, even those of us who have adapted the technology to our lives, don't belong. We're for the simpler pleasures, for the warmth of human contact. God bless us everyone! :)
Overnight split up into Serbia , Croatia , Bosnia ..... Etc. ...er ....Kosovo .... , 5-ed .
I like how facile the writing is--overall the read is smooth as silk--although I agree with 1201 that the first strophe is more balanced than the second. The refrain keeps it all together though. I think maybe if you cut each strophe by 2-4 lines the poem would have more punch. Just my opinion, of course. :)
after
a few more periods (one?)
well the most intelligent rant I've ever seen
S2 jumps a little too much
but the first two lines nails it
5ed