- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Break Free
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Click hereLike the moth from the safety of it's cacoon
or the baby from it's mothers womb
born in beauty enter in
that we may relish loves sweet sin.
Controlled by feelings long since dead,
think with your heart and not your head.
Escape this prison you are in,
that we may relish loves sweet sin.
The moth it turned to butterfly,
the baby uttered welcome cry.
Both free from the safety of their confines,
to enter into better times.
Can you break free from your past,
knowing the fear shall not long last?
Can you but come to me and enter in
that we may relish loves sweet sin?
Break free, break free
Kevin Dustin
- COMMENTS
LeBrozover 17 years agoBy way of further illustration,
"it's mothers womb" should properly be written as,
"its mother's womb"
In the first instance, you've got a contraction and a plural;
As revised they become two possessives.
Such basic errors detract from good poetry and readers stop reading the poem and start looking for the errors.
Anonymousover 18 years ago"it's cacoon". - "It's" is the verb contraction of "it is". "Its" is the possessive form and takes no apostrophe. - And it is "cocoon" not "cacoon".
