But Dinos didn't have souls ....??

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Ashesh9
Ashesh9
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Ages ago Dinosaurs roamed this earth
they hunted , killed , got killed,gave birth .....
Now Mankind rules the same Earth
divided by Passports , rules , place of birth
Someone's Muslim , someone's Jew
Some Christian , some Hindu
divided in our Heart'n Soul
Mankind sits in Spiritual Black Hole
is this Progress
or Regress ?????
But Man is Superior , has Lofty Goals
& Dinos , back then , didn't have Souls ..?!?

Ashesh9
Ashesh9
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Ashesh9Ashesh9almost 10 years agoAuthor
Clearday : thank you for kind comment & regarding those

Multiple Exclamation/ Question marks they have been torn from the anguish of my Soul , the angst , the acid generated by senseless hatred sometimes the reaction is very unbeautiful & unPoetic structure : but sorry to have offended your Poetic sensibilities Tess has been tryin' to cure me of this habit for years , now , on this Forum !

CleardaynowCleardaynowalmost 10 years ago
Another nice poem

Another nice one from you, Ashe.

Good structure and flow, nice phrasing and with something both significant and subtle to say.

As a point of very small detail, I find I dislike multiple ? & !.