Callused Palms

Poem Info
82 words
4.33
4.9k
0
Poem does not have any tags
Share this Poem

Font Size

Default Font Size

Font Spacing

Default Font Spacing

Font Face

Default Font Face

Reading Theme

Default Theme (White)
You need to Log In or Sign Up to have your customization saved in your Literotica profile.
PUBLIC BETA

Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.

You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.

Click here

The palm of your hand is callused
Your fingers long and artistic
Your hands tell stories
Even as you speak with them.

Like birds set free, they flutter
Literature in motion
Speaking for and with you
They grace me.

Their strength and power are obvious
In the careful way you shape your language
Sharing you gentleness with the world
With every wave and caress.

Yet you reach out me
Taking me into your embrace
Holding my soul
In your callused palms.


Please rate this poem
The author would appreciate your feedback.
  • COMMENTS
Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
5 Comments
tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
A BLUE COLLAR WORKER

with tender hands and thoughts, TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
beautiful

and so deep and sensul nd moving on so many levels at once. very romantic sho.

pj

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
I was surprised this was good

When I saw the title and that it was erotic... well, I thought, "Oh great, some silly poem about callused palms from too much masturbation." Thanks for writing a Good poem! :)

CathleenCathleenover 19 years ago
Very nice Sho

Lovely Shoshana - we all have some kind of callus - but we need each other. Nicely done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
A nice tribute.

The discription of the hands is well done - just one typo "Spell check" didn't catch. I think you meant to say "Yet you reach out TO me".

Yet you reach out me

Taking me into your embrace

Holding my soul

In your callused palms.

Just a niggle because this is a nice piece of work from a relatively new (to me) poet.

Share this Poem