can i come with?

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i didn't think so,
but i wish for it,
i hope for it,
i pray that one day you will send for me
and rescue me from this hell i'm in without you.

and it seems dramatic from a spectaters point
but they don't know that i wake alone
next to a pillow you left
still wreaking of you
you don't seem to wash away.

so i cry and wallow
our dogs trying desperately to see me
and comfort me
wondering what is wrong with me
searching under the sheets for you

digging into the mattress
lost in finding you are lost
and so am i
in the deep deep sorrow
of your going away from us.

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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A sadly poignant read of a love gone, a couple incomplete.

Daedalus369Daedalus369about 18 years ago
Deeply moving !

Now this another good one!

It conveys your real self. Or at least a true emotion.

It carries me with you through your thoughts and

feelings. I connect with you in a deeper way.

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