tagNon-Erotic Poetrycan You feel it?

can You feel it?

byDaddys_darkling©

You make me feel
my mind
my heart
feels
my flesh
and the muscle beneath
feels

i feel
safe
scared
loved
used
doted upon
neglected
pain
pleasure
fulfilled
empty

ALIVE!

i like to feel
i LOVE to feel
i love how YOU make me feel
i love how i feel for You
i love You
can You feel it?

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