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Click hereCandy heart kisses
Caramel covered touches
The sugar high excitement
New, unwrapped feelings
Assorted erogenous flavors
Silky, smooth, rough textures
Eyes glazed in discovery
Newfound enchanting delights
Visceral indulgence
Tactile sensory pleasure
Savoring the onslaught
Unbeknownst potential
Too much, not enough
More or less, now or later
Submerged in excess
Candy heart misery
Caramel covered hell.
It is so rhythmic, so NOT 20th Century in its mete. And then it comes to an abrupt end, where you use your imagination. I felt the protagonist's ambivalence would be resolved in a positive way, until the last line.
Great job-in a field where sap and bad taste often predominates, this is a very good poem!