Candy Heart Kisses

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Candy heart kisses
Caramel covered touches
The sugar high excitement
New, unwrapped feelings
Assorted erogenous flavors
Silky, smooth, rough textures
Eyes glazed in discovery
Newfound enchanting delights
Visceral indulgence
Tactile sensory pleasure
Savoring the onslaught
Unbeknownst potential
Too much, not enough
More or less, now or later
Submerged in excess
Candy heart misery
Caramel covered hell.

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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
NOT SUGAR OR FAT FREE

different tastes from the same pot, TK U MLJ LV NV

capricious_chiccapricious_chicover 19 years agoAuthor
One of my favorites

Thanks for your comment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
I love it-but the ending....is jarring!

It is so rhythmic, so NOT 20th Century in its mete. And then it comes to an abrupt end, where you use your imagination. I felt the protagonist's ambivalence would be resolved in a positive way, until the last line.

Great job-in a field where sap and bad taste often predominates, this is a very good poem!

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