- Erotic Poetry
- Can?t Rape the Willing
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Click hereCome on you mother fuckers – strip me bare:
right here on your altar of bigotry.
Cruelly mutilate my mother's breasts,
doing your best to ensure I'll never enjoy
succoring my children again.
Come on you mother fuckers – mind fuck me:
try and gang rape me into suborned obedience.
Screw with my head deep and hard,
with long savage strokes of hate
until you spew your vitriolic jizz of intolerance.
Come on you mother fuckers – see the results:
of picking the wrong victim.
Be shocked by my lustful smile,
as your impotent seed falls
on ground made infertile by love.
Come on you mother fuckers – do me harder:
as I lift my hips to meet your thrusts.
Your hate isn't prepared for me,
when I wrap what I now call family
around your pitiful frame and hump back at you.
Come on you mother fuckers – don't stop now:
your heart ain't no match for mine.
I grab you hair and crush your lips with my passion for life;
slip you the tongue of happiness
and joyously scream in orgasmic freedom.
Come on you mother fuckers – who's next?
- COMMENTS
DeepAsleepalmost 15 years agoSo, I didn't like the poem. I am all for empowerment, but I feel like you didn't even treat YOURSELF with compassion in this poem. Your language is stilted, and while you have a nice, broad vocabulary, it feels like you chose words because they were the biggest ones, not because they were the most interesting or appropriate. How many times have you actually used the word "Succor" in conversation? It's an inherantly melodramatic word, and it reeks of artificial Voice. I'd suggest trying out a more conversational tone. Your style, right now, is the equivalent of announcing very loudly, "ALRIGHT, EVERYONE, I AM GOING TO SHOW YOU A POEM, NOW (MY POMES. LET ME SHOW YOU THEM)" Also, your sentence structure and punctuation are fairly poor, and not in a way that comes across as intentional.
I bet writing this was therapeutic, and I'm sorry for whatever has happened to you, in the past, but I don't like this poem.
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoThis is erotic poetry? Apparently erotic means different things to different people.
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoYou're such a strong person and it shines through in this poem!As timmhmm says, "Fuck 'em!" I need to save this one to favorites and use it in my anger therapy. (learning to get angry-- not anger management)
