- Erotic Poetry
- Caressing Down to My Soul
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I feel your eyes imploring Me
They touch Me with offered obedience
Several layers deep; they caress Me
I turn My eyes away in feigned refusal
You want Me to want you
Have you failed? You wonder...
In search for My last unfelt heartbeats
I find they are with yours; lovers in themselves
Whispering touches; excavating to My source
Your fingers beseeching; pleading
Caressing through layers; descending still
Have you succeeded? You wonder...
Silence of desiring demands; another heartbeat is lost
I care not where it has gone;
for I am now consumed with losing more
discovering more; deeper and deepest within
You need Me to need you
Have you succeeded? I now wonder...
Your arms about Me; the supplication resumes
As your hands gently trace My silhouette
Fingerpainting their yearnings for compliance
I am stripped away; peeled to the spirit
Within the next fragmented breath, I may surrender
Have I succumbed? I wonder...
My soul is stirring; awakening to your needs
The necessary discipline to your being
Commensurate to My commands
Palms and fingers as sensual explorers
of this wanton expedition; yours
Have I succumbed? You now wonder...
The essence of My existence; aroused by your touch
While in your quest for this Domme Grail; My soul has been found
The core of layers exposed; quivering with expectant devotion
You have caressed through the catacombs to this entrance
I require you to require Me
Have I succeeded? I wonder...
You have uncovered what you sought; wantonly
The vulnerability beneath the vixen
The softness beneath the siren
But you are compelled to go beyond; caressing still more
Until I turn to you and command,
“Fetch your cuffs and leash. You are forever My claim”
Have we each succeeded? We wonder not.
- COMMENTS
CaPic267about 17 years agoI had to go over this a couple times to really appreciate what you say here. I suppose that this power a woman has over a man can have some aphrodisiac properties. CP
chocolateandrosesover 18 years agoI like the push that the capitalization gives. It forces the reader to recognize, even as the sub must, the the Dom is in control. The way a religious fanatic would capitalize "God" even in his mind. There is no escaping the sovereignty of her even as she is becoming aroused.
The dance of control and submission is beautifully portrayed. Pain, passion, need, refusal, the tension is tremendous. And in the end, much as any Dom would do, the whip cracks and we are put back in our place.
I think I'll savor this one a while...
LeBrozalmost 19 years agoI'll stick to prose here; any clumsily crude poetic style on my part would only diminish the power of your words.
But first a word about the absurd issue of Caps. This is a question of style; some Dommes expect this, some don't. Worrying about this is to worry about nonessentials. What fits for the D/s couple is all that matters; the rest is a matter of acceptance by others of your choice.
This is a very hard read demanding a great deal from anyone perusing it. You must be focused - conscious - aware.
Focused on the words and their emotional connotations.
Conscious of your differing emotional responses.
Aware of the meaning of the impact on your inner soul.
There are so many levels at play here in the exploration of the power dynamic. I too read it several times, partly just to savor the intense feel of the dynamic as it progresses. Yet, underlying all the fluid dynamism is the clear understanding of who's the D/s and their respective roles.
While not being in a relationship of this type, it is also obvious that a successful relationship of this sort is very demanding, more so than the typical comfortable vanilla one. But the rewards are much greater for both Domme and sub. Despite appearances which can deceive, both become one and experience passions undreamt by most vanilla pairs. And, unlike their vanilla counterparts, the Domme/sub relationship is a process always evolving - despite the common fantasy story myths.
Now you see the power of your words which pulled me to greater awareness and a desire to do your work justice.
