Carry On

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AppleBiter
AppleBiter
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And while you sleep,
remember me . . .
Drunk on fascination,
In love with complexity,
Compassionate, honest,
And enveloped in laughter

And as you awaken,
remember to . . .
Take in the world,
Embrace your challenges,
Open your heart,
And laugh, even if it's breaking

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
~~

Tough love? I broke your heart, but smile anyway.

Honey123Honey123almost 19 years ago
Bittersweet

but so very true. Smile even when your heart is breaking. Tough advice, but advice that we all need to hear.

Great job!

~Honey

Bridget69Bridget69almost 19 years ago
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An influential piece on embracing each day with a positive outlook despite one's inner emotional battle.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Nicely positive.....

....and well put. I particularly like the line "enveloped in laughter", but - personally - I'd drop the needless elipses, but that's just me nit-picking.

Tess

My Erotic TailMy Erotic Tailalmost 19 years ago
beautiful way

to jump start a day~

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