Carthage

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There was a time I loved you.
It was yesterday, about ten o’clock.
You called me from your office
And asked what I wanted for dinner.

Now it’s dark, and I’m waiting for you to be gone to bed
Long enough for me to slip past you into the spare room.

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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
OWNIG UP TO FAULTS

indicates a character flaw. TK U MLJ LV NV

Under_SunUnder_Sunalmost 17 years ago
harsh!

oh my god, thanks Lebroz for bringing this up, what a powerful piece, love it hate it LOVE it.

TzaraTzaraabout 17 years ago
Succinct and clever

And the title makes the whole thing work--gives it depth, if I have interpreted it correctly. Well done.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Carthage ~ aka ~ marriage on the rocks.

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