- Illustrated Poetry
- Castles of Love
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We met and the earth moved.
We came together and it quaked.
I knew, just knew
This was it.
The one.
We were building forever.
A castle upon the shores of life
That would stand the test of time.
Tintagel.
But then I awoke.
I came to see how things really were.
Shifting, unstable
One-sided.
The tide rolled in
Testing the strength of our love.
A castle, yes.
Made of sand.
Washed away too easily.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoNice! I like it
The first 2 lines, though:
We met and the earth moved.
We came together and it quaked.
moved is stronger than quaked. is that what you intend? How about:
We met and the earth moved.
We came together and even heaven quaked.
tazz317over 9 years agoZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ before the Tsunami returns to our shore. TK U MLJ LV NV
