- Non-Erotic Poetry
- catch and hold, 22
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Click herewake to find you
tight sleeping
kiss flutter over
your soft undersides
wash worry clean
until eyebrows smooth
teeth unclench
breathe easy
again for me
I sleep dream
a bubble
we wake
inside
joseph heller
style
blur
muted
safety tested
filled with our
own oxygen supply
smooth and easy
- COMMENTS
jthserraabout 20 years agothere is something more here. Delicate... too delicate. The muted blur, oxygen supply. The catch 22, living and dying together... fading together. There is another level here, disquised in the sparcity-- that's the catch. Well done.
jim : )
Liarabout 20 years agoBut I didn't get the catch 22 reference. Nevertheless, it is a very delicate poem, carefully constructed and lovinly sensual. Yay!
YDDabout 20 years agoSparsely written, it still makes its point.
Too sparse?
It is what it says.
