Cathedral

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It seems I should build a cathedral
To properly express
My love to you

With flying buttresses
And vaulted ceilings
And stained glass windows
And a decor of silver and gold and gems
And exotic stones
And rare woods
With spires and statues and paintings
And gargoyles
(Because a cathedral is not a cathedral without gargoyles)

And hidden staircases leading to the sky
And elaborate rooms without entrance or exit
And catacombs
(Because a cathedral is not a cathedral without catacombs)

It would take centuries to build your cathedral
And it would last forever
And the world would marvel over it
But I’m getting carried away now
And I digress...

It seems I should build a cathedral
To properly express
My love to you

But I’m afraid
All I have to offer
Is the simple chapel
Of my heart

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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
ALWAYS TAKE WHAT IS OFFERED AS TRUE

instead of the BUSH, TK U MLJ LV NV

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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After expressing all that he thinks his love is worth, he brings it down to the here and now of the real world.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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After expressing all that he thinks his love is worth, he brings it down to the here and now of the real world.

echoes_sechoes_salmost 20 years ago
I would give you the sky and paint it too

But I?m afraid

All I have to offer

Is the simple chapel

Of my heart

is the perfect ending to a wonderful poem

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