a vaulted nave
filled with pure notes that soar and swoop
carry my heart
contain it lest it fly straight to the stars
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Oldbear63 favorited this poem!
This is one of my favorites from your 30 in 30 run. Short, yet it manages to create three scenes in my mind. Simply beautiful.
but 'Perfect Weather' shows up on similar stories, but then again, so does 'Lap Dance II'
It elevates me to where I want, yet I don’t know where that is.
Caught my breath, Butters. Beautiful
In a few brief lines, this poem captures multiple meanings. I loved it.
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