tagNon-Erotic Poetrycathedral of bone

cathedral of bone

bybutters©

ribs
a vaulted nave
filled with pure notes that soar and swoop
curl
carry my heart
contain it lest it fly straight to the stars

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by Anonymous

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by Tsotha01/18/14

This is one of my favorites from your 30 in 30 run. Short, yet it manages to create three scenes in my mind. Simply beautiful.

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by HarryHill01/18/14

it may be coincidence

but 'Perfect Weather' shows up on similar stories, but then again, so does 'Lap Dance II'

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by pelegrino01/17/14

Beautiful!
It elevates me to where I want, yet I don’t know where that is.

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by Oldbear6301/16/14

Not what I expected from the Title

Caught my breath, Butters. Beautiful

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by oneiria01/16/14

Wonderful

In a few brief lines, this poem captures multiple meanings. I loved it.

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