- Illustrated Poetry
- cerulean
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cerulean
how life shivers and hymns
in this iridescent hue,
this slight soft skim
of blue, bent
for my coverlet,
my adult amniotic sea
Survivor Poetry Contest
Trigger 7, Poet's Choice (Free Verse)
- COMMENTS
bflagsstabout 15 years agocuz then I'd have to guess what you're talking about. The picture takes the fun out of it. Anyway, excellent poem, however I would've dropped "adult" in the last line, maybe replaced it with something else to keep the beat. But taken as a whole the "adult" is almost superfluous.
