- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Chaos
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Click hereA haze begins to clear
You see how vast the chaos will be
Unable to brace the blow
You mind screams in agony
You see the horrors of the night
You see humanity's fight
You try to turn away
But you can't hide from the day
But still you have to stay
Mind weakened and wanting to stray
From the battles that have let to come
And the wars that must be one
A civilian turned into a soldier
As a child turns older
And ocean turned into asphalt
As that child turns into a adult
- COMMENTS
LeBrozabout 17 years agoConcur with Syndra's assessment, needs a good edit. Don't take it too badly, smaller errors show up glaringly in the better poems, as this is.
Syndra Lynnalmost 20 years agowants to be a good poem. edit?
Unable to brace the blow
You mind screams in agony
Should this be: Unable to brace for the blow; Your mind...
and farther down; let should be yet?
