Christmas Dawn

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sue43mom
sue43mom
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The view from the window was shrouded in a ghostly mist,
Still illuminated by the full Moon as a new day dawned,
To the left the Oak tree with it intricate pattern of twigs stood darkly like a bed post,
The sun arose lifting the soft down of cloud flushed lightly with salmon pink,
Revealing the curvaceous reclining mother earth stretch out under the diaphanous veil of the mist,
The dark aureoles of the pine woods barely covered and as the veil slipped slowly away into the valleys,
Revealing mother earth in all her splendour as those around watched in wonder,
As they celebrated once again the coming of the light of the world.
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She slipped back to the bed raising the covers,
Exposing her companion as she slumbered,
Her sheer silk nightdress draped like the mist over her pregnant body,
Her breasts showing darkly through the filmy fabric,
Her swelling womb bearing her unborn child,
Her lovers arm draped across her thigh,
His fingers nestling in her warm valley below,
She joined hands with her son, fingers entwined
In the moist warmth of their lover’s red hair,
As she slept on.
At peace with the world around her.

sue43mom
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peterswifttpeterswifttalmost 7 years ago
Man, This is Deep

I would really love to somehow interview you as a subject for an up and coming story of mine.

Please consider this.

Respectfully

Peterswiftt

KingCuddleKingCuddleover 7 years ago
So pleasing...and enduring.

I adore how Universal you make me feel.

EnjoylifeParisEnjoylifeParisover 9 years ago

The second part has some Sam Shepard's rhythms... Great !

sue43momsue43momalmost 11 years agoAuthor
to kennyboy8206/03/13

It was the red haired girl friend who was the pregnant one by her son. They shared his affection.

My intention was to represent two parellel images The second verse intended to image the first verses landscape scene.

kennyboy82kennyboy82almost 11 years ago

Hot stuff, and highly erotic! Inter-family breeding no less!

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