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Click hereWide shot, mid-shot, medium close-up,
close-up (CU for short),
BCU, FBCU (that's
Fucking Big Close-Up, Ma'am),
Irish Salute (think
just the eyes),
macro (for flies' eyes to see it):
Dutched, if I want it
at an angle;
Dollied, if I want it
moving;
Spanished, if I want it
gone;
DFI, if I have a
different fucking idea;
and if I ask a spark why
a light's not working,
the fucking fucker's
fucking fucked.
This is the language of my working day:
abstruse and vulgar and fizzing with that
evanescent poetry
of the workplace.
so I get a feeling for this workplace even though I'm unfamiliar with most of the terms you use. You've got almost a call and response sort of pattern to define most of the terms readers won't know, and that is a good device because you provide the information without losing the poetry. Otoh you could have put all this in a context of something in particular being filmed and it might have made for a more lively poem. It's good as is but just a thought for one way to expand it. :-)