- Erotic Poetry
- Climbing Trees
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Click hereBlue abandoned playmates
imagine naked branches
playing in the rain
with rolled up pants
chasing paper cut outs
and drawing adolescent moons.
I was that young once
with thoughts of june
feathered ferns
and flowered tunes
Cartoon realms
know how to forsake
mortal attendance
and strangers bless
the northern sky
in childish limericks.
Ice cream eyes and
candied words
licked butterfat bagels
and strawberry curd.
Sensuality in purity peaks
ripped by
broken branches in
sounds of orgasmic beats;
the nest discarded..
- COMMENTS
Mavrixover 13 years agoThe innocence soon turned as a trees bloom. I love it. Gorgeous wordplay.
LeBrozover 18 years agoJust love it;
such vibrant imagery
at different levels;
picturing innocence
and debauchery...
sweet GA peachesover 18 years agoof 'seasons in the sun' i swear that went through my mind the entire time.. this is one of your best i think, with your playful heart leading the way... and makes me wish to be young, just once more... luv2theblu.-sGp-
sweet GA peachesover 18 years agoof 'seasons in the sun' i swear that went through my mind the entire time.. this is one of your best i think, with your playful heart leading the way... and makes me wish to be young, just once more... luv2theblu.-sGp-
RhymeFairyover 18 years agoI know how hard you worked on this Blue.
I lovvvveee it.
It speaks of loving smiles, playful playmates
and a wholesome heart.
I love the imagery, and
your flow ... smooth as silk.
Just makes me wanna jump
in this poem and play it out ...
Morreee Please !!!!
