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- Collecting Sunrises Haiku
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Every breaking dawn
I'm collecting sunrises
For a heart on fire
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Oldbear63almost 10 years agoDear Storm
This is beautiful and makes me very happy for you, personally.
Cleardaynowalmost 10 years agoLIke this haiku
I think this is much the stronger of your two haikus. There is a thread between the lines that balances the enigmaticness (enigmaticity, enigmatism, enigma or whatever?).
I actually have no idea whether this fully obeys the rules of Haiku nor do I care too much - it works.
