Come To Me

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dsoul
dsoul
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When the night comes
To lay in the sky,
Somewhere you will come to me

I know I caused
You hurt last time,
Still somehow you will come to me

The dusk has gone,
The stars are out
Yet my tears are still falling -
Hopefully you will come to me

But I ask where in the clouds
Are you now?
Floating high and bound
For shelter where even the angels
Cannot find you?

Soon my feet will walk away
From here
And silence will start to reign
But for now I will stay and wait
Wishing you will come back to me.


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tarablackwood22tarablackwood22over 19 years ago
your poem

is mentioned in Tuesday's reviews.

tungtied2utungtied2uover 19 years ago
Losing a loved one

is a truly cathartic moment...and one worth sharing. I liked the permutations at the end of each stanza, but it was missing fromthe fourth, and somewhat pulled my attention away from the feeling of the poem. Overall very heartfelt. Thank you.

*no thermometer

BlueskyBeautyBlueskyBeautyover 19 years ago
a sad story

i could relate to this.

nice effort, keep writing!

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