Confederate Square

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The Mutt
The Mutt
54 Followers

A pyramid of cannonballs
beneath a naked flagpole,
as bees drink Coca Cola
from a green glass bottle stem,

Salvation Army refugees
sack out on picnic tables,
laid out like Sunday chicken
for mosquitoes and black flies,

A bent-backed colored feller
hacks the Johnson grass to ribbons
near a statue of the Colonel
who once owned his Mama’s kin,

A station wagon Yankee
shoots a snapshot of a traitor
while his children beg for Graceland
and his wife refolds the map,

Cement cannons guard the square,
their barrels stopped with garbage,
they defend against tomorrow,
holding ugly truths at bay,

And fat old men with bony dogs
squeeze one last drop of glory
from the one war that was fought
and yearn for honor in its fight,

Pick-up bumpers fly their flag,
their grandsons whistle Dixie,
white-washed columns keep the roof
from falling on their dreams,

And white sheets hang from cotton lines
like ghosts of broken Rebels,
and the crosses on the churches
pray for lightning so they’ll burn.

The Mutt
The Mutt
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LeBrozLeBrozalmost 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

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LeviluvLeviluvover 18 years ago
Great images

And white sheets hang from cotton lines

like ghosts of broken Rebels,

and the crosses on the churches

pray for lightning so they’ll burn.

I was just waiting!

The Mystery ValiantThe Mystery Valiantover 18 years ago
Either more pride or more tears

As I'm new to this Forum my comment is probably redundant. However, I thought that as to having a marvelous subject and very inspirational thoughts, I thought the poem lacked a true face. It just listed the facts. Their was very little reason to feel for the participants or find an anchor in their reason's for coming back to this point in their lives in rememberance.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 18 years ago
perfect

I liked this poem MUTT..a very good and inspirational poem...(~_~)

SweetAsApplePieSweetAsApplePieover 18 years ago
Oh Dear!

I'm sorry...I'm new and I didn't mean to put the comment in twice. I thought the first one didn't work. :(

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