Connection

byHeidi123©

I believe there are some people,
even ones who enter our lives
and leave a short time later,
to whom we remain
eternally connected
by an invisible conduit,
one through which every
quiet thought and
every unspoken word
is transmitted.

When I ache for you,
do you feel it, too?

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by Anonymous07/21/13

Yes I feel you!

I feel it!
I feel you!
Our hearts beat as one!
I'm always aching for you!

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by Desejo07/18/13

Again, I like what you have done with the line breaks. The first stanza is one sentence, broken up into 10 lines. Visually, it mirrors the idea of connections that stretch both deep (the stacked words)more...

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