Consolation Plies

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VannaJonez
VannaJonez
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Cry on my shoulder and find my embrace
I long to sooth your poor troubled heart
A man's hold is far from your rightful place
And mere lust's end may let true love start

Discover within me a world more placid
No muss, no fuss, no sticky sperm
Neither cock nor promises falling flaccid
Both my tongue and my word shall remain firm

I try to hide my eye's devious glint
At the dream of your turning to the Sapphic
My mind grasps desperately for some hint
That could suggest thoughts so brazenly graphic

Your flesh is far sweeter than any sonnet
And my kisses shall fall like the rain down upon it

VannaJonez
VannaJonez
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JWrenJWrenover 9 years ago
Seduced!

Agree about the superb lines 7 & 8 - indeed, the whole of the second stanza is a story in itself. Overall, soothingly seductive (and I'm male!).

VannaJonezVannaJonezover 9 years agoAuthor
Gratitude

Thank you all for your generous ratings and comments! I greatly appreciate it, and hope to have time to submit more work soon.

And yes, the lack of periods is intentional. I prefer the feel and appearance of it that way, for some reason.

TrixareforkidsTrixareforkidsover 9 years ago
Very nice

GM said what I would have had I known how. 5'd

twelveoonetwelveooneover 9 years ago
Quite not

the standard for either here or sonnet

Kudos -5ed

However, am I to assume the periods are a deliberate omission

O my

greenmountaineergreenmountaineerover 9 years ago

Lines 7 & 8 are great and accentuate the first part of the sonnet so well.

Nicely done.