- Erotic Poetry
- Contrast in Clarissa
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A proper English Lady
In an elegant boudoir.
Baccarat crystal, with a fine aged port
Beside the mahogany four-poster.
Tapestries on the wall and
Embroidered pillows with
Thousand thread count sheets.
Elegant lingerie,
Lacy chemise.
Silky thighs,
Creamy skin,
Undulating breasts,
Caressed by gentle hands.
Velvety sex
Inviting.
Awaiting my erect manhood.
A wanting slut
In a neon bright motel.
Chipped glasses and cheap Scotch
Next to the simple mattress.
Fur pelt tacked to the wall and
Lumpy pillows with
Coarse linens.
Body stripped bare
Except for fishnets.
Sweaty skin with
Legs in air
Roughly grasped by calloused hands.
Exposed swollen cunt
Ready to be fucked
By my engorged cock.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 17 years agoContrasting women, circumstances, etc. The point that money makes a difference is apparent, but deep down are the women the same? I've been in both positions and I can tell you that it does make a difference in how the woman feels about herself and what she is doing. The quality of sex is better when the surroundings are better,and the man has more respect for the woman.
emilyroseabout 17 years agoWhich one is your preference? Is there a difference? Sex is sex? Maybe not...
LeBrozabout 17 years agoI'm with Chris on this; it has potential but needs reworking to bring it out. Right now there're so many details spelled out that it seems all feeling has been wrung out. Here's a suggestion you might want to try. Write it up with two columns; the left column the proper lady, the right column the wanton slut. Then take out half the lines. If you pull a line from the left column, leave the corresponding line in in the right column (and vice versa). You could have a most interesting piece with the distinctions between the two being blurred.
Anonymousabout 17 years agoimages is a good idea but doesn't work that well in practice. The language isn't fresh and the imagery is dull, leaving the reader nothing to imagine in his or her mind.
I think with some reworking, this could be good. The structure needs to be improved (perhaps the contrasting images could be used in alternate lines?) and there needs to be fresher imagery (perhaps some similes and/or more concise detail?)
