Control,Controlled,Controlling

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Control, Controlled, Controlling

Control; To manipulate.
Control; To hold power over.
Control; That which I came to hate.
Control; That which I am under.
Controlled like a puppet.
On some very short strings.
Controlled; And not letting,
The caged bird to sing.
Control; To direct,To being lead.
Control; I have none.
Humanity torn to shred.
As I hid from the Son.
  Control; To confirm to.
Control; To shape.
From the day I was born.
Sin lieth in wait.
Confirmed to this world.
From beginning to end.
Life’s in a tornadic swirl.
Tormented and haunted by sin.
Controlling; In Control.
Controlling; Making the choice.
Controlling;I hold.
Controlling; The last voice.

                                                                   Errol”Wiff”Winfree
                                                        08-04-02

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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Overuse of those three words significantly weaken your verse.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Controlling...

influences break down ones ability to be creative...well done

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