- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Cornered Stand
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Click heresidewalk
gumbo
at pinkie street
dusk
hang your hand
there
if you must.
i might seem like im still
in the aeroplane
but, nope, i scuff up your shoes-
fingers pointed at
yellow mannneqins
looking so sweet.
courdoroy hips
cobbly roads
smile
now
or never.
- COMMENTS
LeBrozabout 17 years agoOne of those gems that need be read several times in order to draw out all its subtleties.
fawnieover 19 years agoi mean i got the visual going on, but am abit blond..i'm not sure of what you're trying to say. cheers!
perksover 19 years agoMy comments on your poem are on the new poems thread in the poetry forum. I did not use the thermometer for rating.
Anonymousover 19 years agoI don't have a clue what this is about but it's like sucking on a lemon sherbert, sweet and a little tart with a fizz at the end. I like it.
:Note: I no longer use the thermometer.
