Creak

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Updated 10/31/2022
Created 11/30/2004
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Du Lac
Du Lac
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Crrrreeeeaaakkkk…
The door opens exposing our souls,
A brief look at what lies beyond,
My breathe swirls in and out,
Haunting muse luring me in.

Creak…
Exquisite painful revelations,
The key in your hand,
Standing before you,
Naked, vulnerable, all that I am.

Creak…
Moments of bliss,
Dreams of the heart,
Silky whispers,
Laughter and thought.

Creak..
Creak..
Creak..
Creak..
Cobwebs clinging to door jams,
You brush them aside,
Further you walk, curious and taunt.
Laughter so rich, I drink from your heart.
Cobwebs blow graceful,
Swirling, twirling,
Knitting two souls.

Creak..
Opening doors so far and near,
Crouching, rushing behind you,
Blind to your fear,
Need engulfing reality.

creak......
...........creak
Brutally slow,
Desire feed enlightenment,
Absorbing,
sins, dreams, beliefs,
Fathoms of self,
Scattering wanton souls,
Mirrors to each,
Where I have been,
Where you will go,
Chaotic dreams,
Seducing signals,
Mental discourse,
Fainting ecstasy,
Blind to the source.

Creak.....
So slow to open
You tell me your fear.
Addictive need,
Defenseless moment,
Straining to listen,
The door stands silent.
SLAM!
SLAM!
SLAM!
SLAM!
Frigid wind rushes through,
Alone, echoing doors,
Sultry whispers sip tears as tea,
My heart hears the creaking,
In the past forever to be....

creak.....
dlt © Nov. 28 2004

Du Lac
Du Lac
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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
what a ride in words....

woooowwwww...that was a ride...

gripping with creaks~

witty concept~

"creak"~

Christina O. LeighChristina O. Leighover 19 years ago
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Girlfriend, you are wild!! I love it! So greatly detailed, drawing the reader in. What I would've done was keep those "creek" and "SLAM" words before every stanza, but not as many. No harm meant. Loved the read!

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