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Click hereWaved good bye to mom and dad
took little more than a sack
everything from his bank account
he wasn't coming back
he boarded at the station
stowed his gear overhead
looked out the train car window
contemplating what's ahead
hours and hours of riding
still cannot compare
with the fear and excitement
of what he'd find out there
would he find a kindred spirit
of love long lost and lusted
would he see a happy face
the one he knew and trusted
or would he find an empty station
no sign that bore his name
would he turn right back around
and life go on the same
through the Rockies and the prairie
he watched the country pass
sun rising and sun setting
time both slow and fast
as they neared his stop
he could feel his nerves glowing
pulled into the station
they were almost overflowing
finally at his destiny
he shuffles off and stands
with his guitar strapped on his shoulder
and his heart held in his hands
then a so familiar voice
rings into his ear
"why hello there, stranger,
so glad to see you here"
It evoked a perfect visual for what he was experiencing. Nice.
maybe now our journey will be complete, TK U MLJ LV NV
I had the mental image of the lines, the rest just came out, I almost ended it with the second to last stanza but the last one just followed out my fingers... It's just a poem... This particular poem was meant to amuse more than anything, a lighthearted jab at a fantasy...
Did you think of other scenereos to wrap around those lines, or did you go right to the railroad station? For instance, what if he left his lover angry and then came back?