- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Cruel Intentions
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His words cut like a knife
Screaming through the ears like its piercing the heart
The damage done
Repairable?
Who knows
His words shatter the mind
Like the window as the tree hits it
The damage done
Will it be repaired?
Unsure
His words hurt hitting her in the belly
Feels just like that baseball smacked by the bat and slamming home
Can it be repaired?
Not Sure
His words though just words are real
Just as a kiss on the cheek is real
His words create anger and fear
Like a stalker heading for its victim
Will it vanish?
Repair?
Isolate?
Abandon?
His words hurt drawing tears
His actions far worse than any word
Her mind alone
Split in a million pieces
Can He fix it?
Does He even care?
Who knows
Her mind cries out in anguish
Begging for His strength
Receiving nothing
Nothing at this point
But
Cruel intentions
niyah2
- COMMENTS
niyah2over 20 years agoAuthorThank you both for your comments. I enjoyed writing this poem and i enjoy writing period. I have over 100 poems written and 30 or so stories. Some I submit and others I do not. But I do love to write. It helps to hear something back about what we write so again thank you both for saying something to me.
niyah2
Maria2394over 20 years agokeep writiing!! your images here are much better than your other poem offered today, more intelligent, and the inner dialogue would make it even stronger with some tightening up of paragraphs in relation to certain phrasing..keep it up. and we'll all get to watch you grow here :) maria
Icingsugarover 20 years agoAn inner dialog, bouncing back and forth. A poem asking and answering it's own question, but every answer just another affirmation of the doubt.
It's an interresting concept that I believe could work very well. But for some reason, I can't seem to engage myself in the situation described.
Regardless, it was an interresting attempt. Keep writing.
