- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Cruinne
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Click hereA lone
circuit, a simple
outline of exploration
discharging ideals from
the static where they hide
to give us a completely
different prospect for
the world where
we live.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 18 years agoI understand Cruinne to mean "World", and the shape of the poem is not a circle, spiral, orb or anything else, it is... the World!
I particularly like the phrase "discharging ideals from
the static where they hide" - it is very evocative. "A spark exhumes the dead dreams of hope into a new living future for the world!)
Am I reading something into your poem? It is so compact yet complex!
Beautifully told as all your poems are!
sackover 18 years agonot a word wasted in this little masterwork!
RhymeFairyover 18 years agoYou take words, toss the, flip them then
confuse them. The words ... confused.
I love how you paint with your words. Your imagery is always tight and perfect. Seems to be right on, everytime. I love it !!!
I mean that. You have a style that leaves me in awe, and I am honored to see it at work on the threads and here ... Just amazing~!!
