Cum Groove

Another piece of more music than poetry.

For all those who left negative comments about your piece, cum groove, it's obvious that they didn't think back to what it's like to get laid really hard. The tempo of the music and the vocal accompaniment were just what you need to hear when you're doing the horizontal bop. My girlfriend and I started to get really into in and then we put the music on and, I've got to tell you, it put us both over the top. Hopefully you'll feel inspired to put up some more music to play by.

So rubbish, just repeative.

Have a little mercy! At least let the girl come at the end. Instead, the music sounds like the guy's pounding away and the girl's almost there, but not quite, and he just leaves it at that. She's going to have to take care of things for herself after he's fallen asleep (with his headphones on).

Repetative and rather dull, a big comedown in quality since sxy_kitten isn't submitting at the minute and there's nothing from EroticEnchantress this time.