- Erotic Poetry
- Curse My Name...
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Give to me your pleasure
Share with me your pain
Wrap me in your passion
Regard me with disdain
Tell me all your secrets
Fall on me like rain
Screaming wild obscenities
Blanket me with shame
And when you have been sated
The beast within you tamed
Hold me in your loving arm's
As you curse my very name
Michael H. Bodor 12/10
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- COMMENTS
IMspideyalmost 13 years agoAuthorTrue, my grammer sucks as bad as my puntuation (not to mention my spellering) But I'm working on it...
WillowedCabinalmost 13 years agoI am not a grammar nazi. I promise. That being said, you yet again incorrectly use an apostrophe. English grammar absolutely sucks and the rules are very wishy-washy, but the apostrophe is one thing that WILL get in the way of your reader's escape in the poem. Here's a link to help--->http://www.englishclub.com/esl-articles/possessive-apostrophe.htm
faq_u2almost 13 years agoThis line gave me tiny little shivers.
"Screaming wild obscenities
Blanket me with shame"
I liked the flow and the rhythm of your words.
Thanks for sharing :)
