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Dull blade
needs sharpening
shinning
make it pretty.
Hesitation
kills the mood
halting flow
of emotion.
Thinking
ruins the
temporary
escape
makes you
question motive
look for reasons.
Breathe and live.
j.b
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Microwave0venalmost 18 years agoI know what you mean
Dark mood, but captured well, exactly how someone might feel at that moment, too close to the edge.
Tom Collinsalmost 18 years agoSo frightening
You so perfectly capture being inside of that state of mind. It saddens me that people feel this way...especially you.*kiss*
