Cutting Teeth

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"I'll knock out four to give you two"

The mother fucker stole my blender
magic chopper, Cutco knife.
Said, "Grow some teeth and learn to chew
your own way through self tied tethers,
crack away this lock jaw life."

Mother fucker snapped my brushes
as if sirens could somehow render
our masterpiece to speed to life.
The mother fucker kicked my crutches.
"Take flight!"


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Survivor:
Form C: Curtal Sonnet
Trigger:16

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annaswirlsannaswirlsabout 15 years agoAuthor
I fixed the meter

http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?p=30524865&posted=1#post30524865

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureabout 15 years ago
I'm........

....intimidated by your ability to put a modern spin on forms so smoothly. <SMALL>(I hate you)</SMALL><P>

Not really.<P>

Tess

Imaginary_friendImaginary_friendabout 15 years ago
somehow

this reminds me of my dad tossing me into the pool at n early age and telling me to sink or swim. I like your attitude and how you present yourself with your poetic voice. Good work.

bflagsstbflagsstabout 15 years ago
My buddy worked for Cutco

he was a shill. He said he wasn't promoted because he wouldn't go to church with the management. "lock jaw life." is a good line, perhaps "jawed" would work slightly better?