Daisho

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oneiria
oneiria
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Beyond the window lay Tokyo,
a splayed neon moon,

a pitiful match burning
against the screaming darkness.

Toshiko knelt,
naked before the window,

watching the rain
and looking into the gentle eyes

of the one who would free her
from this Emptiness,

the one she had pursued
from life to life.

He raised thekatana
and passed it through her neck

like butter,
her rolling head watching as

thewakizashibit into his belly,
and they both listened to

the whispering ghosts
hungering for rebirth.


oneiria
oneiria
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Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years ago
Kill

Bill : part 3

KittehSoftPawsKittehSoftPawsover 10 years ago
(=^_^=)

I guess when you have so much to say, and just cant find the right words... the only thing left to do is to 5-star.

Beautiful poem.

todski28todski28over 10 years ago
You

Always deliver I'm depth, simple elegant the space between the stanzas leaving you room for the mind to fill in and process the story, another awesome piece.

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago
a thinker...

Simple yet elegant and deep.

Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years ago
Unnerved me!

Normally I would recoil from something like this. But this one is beautiful, very sad, but maybe not so sad? This one will stay with me for a while.